duminică, 28 noiembrie 2010

Limba romana si "filmicitatea"

Un pasaj dintr-un scenariu teoretic sau nu, intai in engleza, si apoi in limba romana, pentru a exemplifica faptul ca...mai bine va las sa cititi. Incercati sa vizualizati secventa respectiva cu ochii mintii. Mentionez ca textul a fost scris original in limba romana si apoi tradus, nu invers. Here it goes:

EXT.PARK - DAY

DAN is walking, apparently without any particular
destination. We see him from the back. We hear somebody
running, and then stopping. DAN turns around, then the camera
turns around as well. It's her, the girl from the bus, she's
catching her breath, smiling.
                                   THE GIRL
                         Wait... Just a sec.

She's catching her breath again.
                                   THE GIRL (CONT'D)
                         Why did  you thank ME?

                                   DAN
                         What do you mean why? For the
                         inspiration, of course. Such a
                         precious and rare little thing. I
                         take it you liked it, then? (with a
                         certain satisfaction in his voice)

                                   THE GIRL
                         (a bit proud)
                         What makes you think I liked it?

                                   DAN
                         Well... (smiling a bit, and
                         pointing his eyes at her, who is
                         still breathing heavily)

                                   THE GIRL
                         (ashamed and smiling)
                         Yes, I did like it. More so, I liked
                         it a lot...

                                   DAN
                         Then, I thank you even more. (He
                         makes a silly but funny bow)
                         Cheerio.(He turns to leave.)

                                   THE GIRL
                         Wait.

                                   DAN
                         Yes, little lady?

                                   THE GIRL
                         Bianca. My name is Bianca.


                                                                 

EXT.PARC - ZI

DAN merge, aparent fara vreo destinatie anume. Amorsa, auzim
pasi de alergat, care se opresc. DAN se intoarce, camera se
roteste si ea. Este fata din autobuz, isi trage sufletul,
zambind.

                                   FATA
                         Stai ...putin.

Isi trage sufletul iar.
                                   FATA (CONT'D)
                         De ce mi-ai multumit mie?

                                   DAN
                         Cum de ce? Pentru inspiratie,
                         desigur. Ceva foarte pretios si
                         rar. Sa inteleg ca ti-a placut?

                        (cu o usoara satisfactie in voce)
                                   FATA
                         De unde ai tras concluzia ca mi-a
                         placut? (usor de tot mandra)

                                   DAN
                         Pai... (zambind, si aratand din
                         ochi catre ea, care inca respira
                         greu)

                                   FATA
                         (rusinata)Da, mi-a placut. Chiar...
                         foarte mult. 

                                   DAN
                         Atunci, cu atat mai mult iti
                         multumesc. (Face o plecaciune
                         simpatica) Adio. (Da sa plece.)

                                   FATA
                         Stai.

                                   DAN
                         Da, domnita?

                                   FATA
                         Bianca. Ma cheama Bianca.


Ceva parca nu...         nu?

Conventia filmica romana contemporana nu e foarte extinsa, nu poate cuprinde nici pe departe orice subiect, fata de cea americana. La noi se preteaza filmele de festival, cu personaje si scenarii sarace, sictirite, vulgare si, in cele din urma plictisitoare ca naiba. Si asta e din cauza multor factori, oricum o societate bolnava nu poate decat sa aiba o cinematografie bolnava. Eu as dori ca sa se poata face orice gen de film in romana, fara a da in penibil din cauza faptului ca suntem romani si ca nu suna bine. Vreau sa vad un science fiction in romana si sa raman masca. Sunt deschis la orice... chiar un film cu animale...

Dar serios acum, habar nu am cum voi rezolva dilema asta. Time will tell.